First real Hollow Form

Hi Don........

Since you specifically asked for a critique, I have an opinion......and, it's worth exactly what you paid for it!!!!!

I like it when others venture critical comment on my bowls, too. This doesn't mean you have to agree with it, and although sometimes I do not agree with criticism I get.....there are times when I do, as well!

Your cedar hollow form is astounding, really! There is a lot of grain pattern in there that, to my way of thinking, conflicts with the very detailed top. You did just a superb job doing it, but there's a bit too much stuff going on there. I usually (not always!) reserve intricate detail work for wood that is more "plain" looking......and that piece of wood, is not!

You know the old saying: "less is more"!....and, it may not apply in all cases but, in your vessel's case, it might have been a little less busy looking up there.

No question about it, you are a superb craftsman, and the effort you spend on your work shows it! I know how it is.....sometimes we just get so involved in doing the details, that we end up not knowing where to stop......I'm sure guilty of that, old buddy! I need to learn this principle.....chisel it in stone.......darn, darn, darn if I can't get it through my thick skull sometimes!

I usually only critique when it's asked for, so it's all your fault! For the most part, the rule is.....If you can't say anything good......well, you know!

ooc

Thanks Mr. Don and James!

Thanks Odie, I always respect your opinion.
Don L.

Don I love the rich warm colors.  Nice Job